Saturday, August 2, 2008

Ret Par Likha Hua Naam

Before you start reading my first kavita i need you to read the disclaimers :D

Disclaimer
1. This poem has nothing to do with my personal status ( I'm happily engaged :-) )
2. Being the first time i didn't bother much about hindi/urdu consistency. Purists may forgive me.
3. Constructive criticism is very much invited (including "Don't bother with poetry again" !!)




Pata tha ishq main mar mit na payenge hum,

Par fir bhi aashiqui ka shauq rakhne lage

Ab woh hume chahe ya na chahe

Par ret ke gharondo main hum hi apne khwab sanjone lage


Pata tha un aankhon ka pyala nasib nahi mujhe,

Use dosh na dena duniya walon

Jab uski ek nazar ko apne hisse ka pyar maan,

Hum hi apni khushfehmi main madhosh hone lage


Sagaron ki baat kahan karte usse,

Hum to lehron se bhi anjaan chale

Jo Ret pe kured ke uska naam,

Hum bhi apna prem amar karne lage


Par thokar to lagna hi thi jo,

Ek sapne par hum apna haq samajhne lage

Jin raaston ko taakti thi nigahain humesha,

Ab to we raaste bhi hume anmane se karne lage


Par

Itna zulm seh kar bhi koi gila nahi usse,

Kyunki,

Aakhirkar hum ab,

Pyar ka matlab samajhne lage



9 comments:

  1. Frst of all........Congratulations on ur frst poetic endeavor. As u said, a bit of refinement is indeed required. But still the thoughts are comendable. Hope to see another one quite soon :)

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  2. good man,
    tell me one thing ye engagement ke pahle likhi thi yaa baad main....
    ;) any how good effort....

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  3. "Did I like the Poem?"

    "Yes. You did."

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  4. Likhi to sagai ke baad hi hai but look at disclaimers ;-)

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  5. Samajtey the hum hi har mushaayrey ki shama,
    per ab maangna chahtey hain aapse kshama,
    hamare vichaar ab aap k liye badalne lage,
    Arey ab to Thakur saab bhi kavita Gadne lage..

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  6. Kavita main hi to jeevan ka ras hai

    Vicharon par kya tumhara kya bas hai

    Dil mera hi bada manchala hai, aur waise bhi

    Aakhir Thakuron par kiska bas chala hai

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  7. kavita hi jeevan ki vyatha hai,
    ye baat hum dono ko bhi pata hai,
    gyaat ho gar ki "sholay" naam ki ek chitrakala hai,
    log kehte hain Thakuron per Gabbar ka bas chala hai..:P

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  8. kafi waqt baad tera blog padha..teri poetry padh kar shock laga ki ITT+IIM banda is tarah ki poetry bhi kar sakta hai..
    bt newys comendable job dude..
    keep up gud wrk

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